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[楼主]   2006-06-27 18:47   IP: Loged
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Once upon a time, there were two people living together. They are brothers and their names are Eric and Tom. They were both in love with a beautiful girl, and both tried to win her heart. However, the girl felt nothing for neither boys. But one of the boy is too much in love with the girl, that he thought he would die if the girl keeps running away from him, so he decides to talk to her. First, he tried to find the perfect occasion to do it. There is a bar very quiet and romantic down the street
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21 楼   2006-07-03 15:41   IP: Loged
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Once upon a time, there were two people living together. They are brothers and their names are Eric and Tom. They were both in love with a beautiful girl, and both tried to win her heart. However, the girl felt nothing for neither boys. But one of the boy is too much in love with the girl, that he thought he would die if the girl keeps running away from him, so he decides to talk to her. First, he tried to find the perfect occasion to do it. There is a bar very quiet and romantic down the street.
The boy rushes to go there when..

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22 楼   2006-07-08 16:40   IP: Loged
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Once upon a time, there were two people living together. They are brothers and their names are Eric and Tom. They were both in love with a beautiful girl, and both tried to win her heart. However, the girl felt nothing for neither boys. But one of the boy is too much in love with the girl, that he thought he would die if the girl keeps running away from him, so he decides to talk to her. First, he tried to find the perfect occasion to do it, There is a bar very near from the town
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[楼主]   2006-07-09 08:28   IP: Loged
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Once upon a time, there were two people living together. They are brothers and their names are Eric and Tom. They were both in love with a beautiful girl, and both tried to win her heart. However, the girl felt nothing for neither boys. But one of the boy is too much in love with the girl, that he thought he would die if the girl keeps running away from him, so he decides to talk to her. First, he tried to find the perfect occasion to do it. There was a bar very close to the town, and the food there was great
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24 楼   2006-07-09 15:57   IP: Loged
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Once upon a time, there were two people living together. They are brothers and their names are Eric and Tom. They were both in love with a beautiful girl, and both tried to win her heart. However, the girl felt nothing for neither boys. But one of the boy is too much in love with the girl, that he thought he would die if the girl keeps running away from him, so he decides to talk to her. First, he tried to find the perfect occasion to do it. There was a bar very close to the town, and the food there was great  delicious but very expensive
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[楼主]   2006-07-12 19:24   IP: Loged
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Once upon a time, there were two people living together. They are brothers and their names are Eric and Tom. They were both in love with a beautiful girl, and both tried to win her heart. However, the girl felt nothing for neither boys. But one of the boy, Tom, is too much in love with the girl, that he thought he would die if the girl keeps running away from him, so he decides to talk to her. First, he tried to find the perfect occasion to do it. There was a bar very close to the town, and the food there was great, but it's very expensive. So he needs to find a way to make some money

P.S. Change of rules (to ease the process): 5 word rule change into a one sentence rule, meaning one has to write a whole sentence at once.

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26 楼   2006-07-12 20:24   IP: Loged
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Once upon a time, there were two people living together. They are brothers and their names are Eric and Tom. They were both in love with a beautiful girl, and both tried to win her heart. However, the girl felt nothing for neither boys. But one of the boy, Tom, is too much in love with the girl, that he thought he would die if the girl keeps running away from him, so he decides to talk to her. First, he tried to find the perfect occasion to do it. There was a bar very close to the town, and the food there was great, but it's very expensive. So he needs to find a way to make some money.He works for many shops and helps the farmers on Sundays,he tries his best to collect money
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[楼主]   2006-07-13 11:08   IP: Loged
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Once upon a time, there were two people living together. They are brothers and their names are Eric and Tom. They were both in love with a beautiful girl, and both tried to win her heart. However, the girl felt nothing for neither boys. But one of the boy, Tom, is too much in love with the girl, that he thought he would die if the girl keeps running away from him, so he decides to talk to her. First, he tried to find the perfect occasion to do it. There was a bar very close to the town, and the food there was great, but it's very expensive. So he needs to find a way to make some money. He worked for many shops and helped some farmers on Sundays; he tried his best to collect money. One day, he finally got enough money to buy himself a nice suit and to ask the girl out to the bar, but the unthinkable happened.
---- ghost_X
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