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Life of a man

ghost_X 于Sat, 10 Feb 2007 06:52 www.our-sky.com/oubb/418453.html IP: Loged

I walk
On the desert Sun
In the bloody Moon
Cover the cloak of night

I lie
Under the fallen leaves
On hands of grave-diggers
Breathe lungs of the plagued

I stare
Below the arctic ice
Above cliffs of madness
Tempt the gates of hell

yes, the poem is a bit dark, but it just flowed out during the moments.

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1 楼 2007-02-11 00:14 IP: Loged

u r right
a man's life is keeping walking,lying and staring...^^
---- kiddy

[楼主] 2007-04-09 07:40 IP: Loged

I'm just an ant, trying to grasp the concept of the universe, being crushed in the process
---- ghost_X

4 楼 2007-04-09 09:41 IP: Loged

hm........is that wat u feel about life?......

dark.......
whatever.....life is dark......
---- 蓝色泡泡鱼

[楼主] 2007-04-10 03:31 IP: Loged

well, no.
it's a metaphor refering to my existential struggle, as I contemplate over my purpose in this world as a human being.
and.. well, a little dark during the process of struggling.
but once one completes the journey of an existential hero [like the Eugene Ionesco type], it's no longer dark as one is....... well, proliferated from this struggle
---- ghost_X

6 楼 2007-04-12 09:05 IP: Loged

haha.....i understood it now.......
---- 蓝色泡泡鱼

7 楼 2007-04-19 08:38 IP: Loged

That's men's life
---- 与影对酌

8 楼 2007-08-03 22:05 IP: Loged

the life is just for achieve the dream with pian,happy,ill and try
---- 枫上风下

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